Haiku!

For my English appreciation class, my teacher made us write a haiku. I wrote this one about a special something/someone...

A haiku needs four parts:
1) 17 syllables over a span of 3 lines consisting of 5-7-5.
2) tell of one of the four seasons
3) involve nature
4) has some sort of thought or idea

I didn't know of the last few rules so I only did step one. so here is my haiku, my lame and I stress lame sonnets will be coming next.

Great Love of Mine

My lips know the taste
Of your soft and lit ends that
take me far and high.


for fun I wrote another one right now...

Afternoon

Shapes and sounds float slow
As I melt pondering the
quiet drifting clouds



can you figure out what im talking about?